22A


Reflection: I think that in the last elevator pitch I needed to add a geographic location of where I was going to launch the product. Also, after Dr. Pryor provided the same feedback to the class, adding a launch location was a must. The feedback that most amazed be was that I got a lot of feedback to be a little bit more specific about my product. I also got great feedback because people liked a lot my hook.
Changes: Based on the feedback I received, I added a geographical location of where I was going to launch my product. I also added some details of how to get my product once it launches. I also tried to talk a little bit slower and added more emotions to my pitch. I also tried to be more confident when I was opening that pitch with my hook. If I compare myself to the time I recorded my first pitch. I’d say I gotten more comfortable. Speaking in front of a camera for my peers is easier to do now. My third pitch is definitely the best out of the three because I’m more confident than I was before.

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  1. SmashBro2November 12, 2019 at 11:03 AM

    Hey David,

    Good pitch; it is definitely a step in the right direction from your previous, as I have now watched all of them. The added information and statistics were very helpful and needed as it gives your product more substance and differentiates you even more-so than your competition. Some more enthusiasm in your pitch, however, is needed as it will get the audience more engaged. Maybe get like a prop phone and drop it to get that effect.

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